On Technology of Horcrux creation
(my comments on “Diary Horcrux Murder” by berkeleyjake)
It may be possible that the result of the ritual sacrifice can be
somehow stored and the ritual creating Horcrux can be done later.
What’s more important is this:
“Well, you split your soul, you see,” said Slughorn, “and
hide part of it in an object outside the body. (HBP, chapter
23)
and
“By an act of evil — the supreme act of evil. By committing
murder. Killing rips the soul apart. The wizard intent upon
creating a Horcrux would use the damage to his advantage: He
would encase the torn portion —”
“Encase? But how — ?”
“There is a spell, do not ask me, I don’t know!” said
Slughorn, shaking his head like an old elephant bothered by
mosquitoes. “Do I look as though I have tried it — do I look
like a killer?” (still Slughorn in the same chapter)
and
[…] what would happen to the wizard so determined to evade
death that he would be prepared to murder many times, rip his
soul repeatedly, so as to store it in many, separately
concealed Horcruxes. (Dumbledore in the same chapter)
and
“No,” said Ron, before Harry could answer. “So does it say how
to destroy Horcruxes in that book?”
“Yes,” said Hermione, now turning the fragile pages as if
examining rotting entrails, “because it warns Dark wizards how
strong they have to make the enchantments on them. From all
that I’ve read, what Harry did to Riddle’s diary was one of
the few really foolproof ways of destroying a Horcrux.” (DH,
chapter 6)
What I am saying is that Horcrux must be LATER created from
a part of soul separated by a murder (or ritual sacrifice)
BEFORE. Which means that first must be murder and then there is
Horcrux-creating ritual (“a spell” as Slughorn said), and then
perhaps even later there is some more magic to “make the
enchantments on them” to protect the Horcrux from destruction.
Conclusion is obvious. It was not possible for Voldemort to
create a real Horcrux and even less it was possible for him to
make those protective enchantments on it when he was killed just
after the act of murder which was supposed to rip a part of his
soul by murdering Harry. Therefore, whatever was in the Harry’s
scar was not a full-fledged Horcrux and certainly it lacked those
protective enchantments (if there are any).
There is a flaw in my argument (I still stand behind Harry’s scar
not being a full-fledged Horcrux, although we don’t know whether
it still couldn’t somehow help Tom Riddle to stand back from
death). What’s the deciding point in time is actually a murder
not creation of a Horcrux. If Tom Riddle ripped part of his soul
by killing Myrtle Warren, then it would remember only things
which happened before her death.
How much alive is the part of the soul in the Horcrux? And does
it have any means of perception? I don’t think so. So, even if it
was still alive and it still had some self-consciousness (and
that’s truly disgusting), it couldn’t learn about things which
happened after Myrtle’s death, which Ginny didn’t know about.
Actually, there is a flaw even in this contra-argument. If the
diary was made into a horcrux, it is probable that at least for
the rest of his Hogwarts years (and possibly for a long time
afterwards) Tom Riddle was carrying the thing around and perhaps
even writing into it. So, his memories of post-Myrtle-death
events could there that way. Umph, I am glad to have this solved.
So, yes, a horcrux is a living thing, which can still learn
things. Ewww.
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HP fanfiction as sci-fi
(my comments on the Reddit thread “What if there's no magic gene?” by 15_Redstones)
Concerning your thoughts about “The magic system is so whimsical,
I don’t think it should be susceptible to manipulation by
scientists.”, I am a bit torn. The one thing I really like about
the …
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Why to drop fanfiction story immediately
pink-pipes asked on Reddit
What Tropes or Scenes Have Made You Drop a Fic Immediately?
I have prepared this list:
- harem, Ménage à trois, polygamy, fluid sexuality, PWP
- adult/child + Death Eater/normal romantic relationships (yes,
I am certain there are some exceptions, but I have yet to find
truly …
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Historical Harry Potter stories
(my comments on the reddit thread “Fics like Starnlicht?” by
BallZealousideal2109)
It is strange how little fanfiction authors investigated the
whole area of the historical stories, a life of the magical
community outside (and before) the canonical storyline. Aside
from replants of the normal fanon stories to the past (“Prince …
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Horcruxes and Unhappy Dark Lord
Originally published as “Quest for Immortality by the Unhappy
Dark Lord” on Reddit.
I was thinking about this very unhappy adept for the Dark
Lordship, Tom Riddle:
- Hufflepuff’s Cup — while Tom Riddle was still travelling after
leaving Borgin and Burkes, and he considered dropping it into
The Mariana Trench …
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Overall post on “Breakfast in New York”
(cover letter for presenting my reviews of “Breakfast in New
York” by Radaslab; the first post and the second post)
I was rereading again “Breakfast in New York” by Radaslab and
I don’t know for certain why it aggravates me so much. Certainly
there is the conflict between generally …
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One more on “Breakfast in New York”
(second round of my comments on “Breakfast in New York” by
Radaslab; the first post)
There is this author’s note:
Eros Syndrome was not named or defined back then, but it was
there. Eros Syndrome was needed to explain certain things.
Namely, how could Hermione have let that happen …
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Working class Snape?
(my post “All Our Kin: Snape and Evanses flight from the urban poverty of early 1980s”)
Discussing the character of Severus Snape in other thread, I was
made to think about the class structure behind the story. We know
that Severus Snape was a son of a jobless worker in …
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Good Petunia Stories
(my Reddit post “LF: Petunia is a witch afterall”)
I know about these:
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How not to use your character as a mouthpiece
(my contribution on the thread “Using your character as a mouth
piece” by Snoo)
If you are interested in the theory of writing, then I have to
suggest to you two very obscure and old books (yes, old books are
quite often better than the new ones): “The Mind of …
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Foundations of The Dark Magic
(my comments on “The Light and the Dark” by Uncommonality)
One of the many issues with the universe of the Harry Potter
books, which has never been fully resolved in the books by Ms
Rowling is the true nature of the Dark Magic. It is really not
explained. Dark Magic …
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On Vampires
(my comment regarding vampires on AO3)
Technical question of the day. Would the Homonum Revelius
spell reveal a hiding vampire? I figure it will reveal
a hiding werewolf but they’re still sort of human. Aren’t
vampires supposed to be “dead” and so would such a spell
reveal them …
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On Faith after Witch-hunts
(my comments on “Doesn't it make sense for wizards to be
Christian? A Historical Perspective” by u/PhantomKeeperQazs)
Of course, all Europeans almost without an exceptions were
Christians well into the 19th century. It was traditionally
unacceptable (or perhaps only unfashionable) not to be Christian
in Europe well into the …
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Werewolf stories
(my entry on “What are you reading? Weekly Post for 2021-01-06”)
After the discussion on other
thread,
I was given reference to three Harmony+werewolves stories (Lupin bites
somebody in the end of the third year). I found them surprisingly good:
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Magicians’ Realism
(thoughts after listening to the episode “Victorian Realism”
of the BBC’s In Our Time, originally developed as a review of
“Strangers at Drakeshaugh” by Northumbrian and also a possible
commentary on “Everything Wrong With HARRY POTTER Fanfictions”
by Purplemist14, which is HIGHLY recommended reading for any
hopeful fanfiction writer …
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Micro review of “Grow Young with Me” by Taliesin19
(my reaction to the published review of “Grow Young with Me”
by Taliesin19)
Except the quality of this review is on par with those on the DVD
box. This is not a review, it is a promotion by a fan. There is
not one weakness found, and although I like …
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Muggles-centred Harry Potter fanfiction stories
(my comments during the thread “Stories where Ginny is actually
nice to Harry’s girlfriend?” by /u/AcerbicOrb)
Let me add here a dump of my “muggles” folder (for later
reference):
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One More Anti-Harmony
(my comments on the thread “why does almost everyone hate the
Harry/Hermione ship?” by patriot_man69420)
I don’t hate the ship, although I generally prefer Hinny,
I could admit that Ginny is extremely poorly written by JKR,
and fanfiction has to add a lot of her personality to …
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No superheroes!
(my comments on “the thread on reddit”)
First of all, you should avoid the dark trap of all
adventure/fantasy stories: my story must be more dramatic than
the previous one, my heroes and my antagonist must be more
significant than the previous one. It is not enough to save …
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Live like you are not a Christian
(my comments on “Breakfast in New York” by Radaslab)
Finished reading the story and there are two overwhelming
thoughts in my head. The first is obvious and rather normal for
most of the fanfiction stories (and especially so-called romantic
ones): it should be cut to like one quarter or so …
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Ad “My theory on Christianity in the Wizarding World”
(my comments on “My theory on Christianity in the Wizarding
World” by LordMacragge)
I prefer the explanation in chapter 16 of Thou Shalt Not Suffer
by TheWizardsHarry: there are horrible problems with our
translations of the verse, because all Bible translators were
Muggles, and they just couldn’t grasp the …
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On bashing
Bashing and similar are not the cause of poor quality of their
stories, but they are just a symptom of the author being lead by
the poor design of his story into areas, which would be
impossible to resolve or it would be too difficult, so bashing is
then just …
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Harry Potter and Dorothy Sayers
(my comments on the thread “Overused tropes” by
u/Aa11yah)
OK, I will suggest a very weird book for reading. The Mind of
the Maker by Dorothy L. Sayers (yes, the author of detective
stories with Lord Peter Wimsey) is one of the best books on the
art of writing …
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Another comments on the Accidental Animagus & al.
(my comments on the thread “What are your thoughts on the
direction taken by 'Animagus at War' by White Squirrel?” by
u/SnobbishWizard)
I have already (many chapters ago) wrote a review, which
included my comments on this story, and so far I stand behind it.
On top of that …
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Note on Luna
(my comments on the thread “Best Luna fics” by
u/jasoneill23)
I like Luna in the Northumbrian’s stories, but there she is
not very central to the story (perhaps, aside from Yggdrasil by
Northumbrian, but it is not his best story). Actually, the
chapter 3 of Tales of the …
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